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Snakes delicate kiss







Serpent eyes traipse
across Willow’s Celtic woods.

Entrancing every tragic tulip
and ramped rose.

As she makes them burgeon with
just one electrifying peck
of her sun bitten hair.

Jubilant.







Author notes

Prompt:
http://blazing-wolf1763.deviantart.com/art/Child-of-The-Earth-119397127
30 words

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  • lunarlunacy
    July 16

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    You speak volumes with so few words, an art in itself. Kudos and congratulations on a much deserved shiny thing.


  • Draig aine gold member
    April 25
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    CONGRADULATIONS ON THE GOLD

    well deserved, this is so original, a gorgeous write tripping on the tounges of Celtic Sprites


  • ScarletO gold member
    April 25

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    Congratulations on the gold win. So well done and worthy of gold.


  • Miss Faerie Greeters member
    April 25

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    Thank you for your entry.

    Across Willow's Celtic Woods. That was brilliant. The whole piece was amazing, brought to life - a tale in front of me.

    Brilliant word choice, sun bitten hair is one of the best images I've read in a long time.

    Thank you for entering my contest and good luck
    Shari