Let me be your selkie
sweet enchantress
beauty to behold
along with a certain tenderness.
The non-stop harmonizer
elegant temptress
powerfully wicked
with the body to make men jest.
Thoroughbred hell-raiser
seductive tigress
with sharpened claws
and gentle caresses.
Your select.
What do you choose?
One of three
or all pulled together in a noose?
What do you think?
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This is a really good poem - I like the mystical imagery that you have here
I think from a constructive criticism point you might like to look at adding some punctuation to help the flow a little and let the reader know when to pause and reflect on what you are saying - but that is just my opinion and I enjoyed this poem!
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This poem is unique! I loved your form and structure.
your rhyme was very powerful and unforced until the last pair of rhymes. hmmm noose, loose, obtuce, use, refuse, moose lol. if you did not know if you click edit this poem on the right of your screen you will get the new screen where you write your poem if you look at your option menu on the right you have synonym finder and a rhyme finder they will come very handy when you least expect it.
this was really good. your imagery was swet and simple.
friendly suggestion. Emotion and Juicy sink your teeth in imagery is well recieved in any poem.
well done keep wirting.
Max
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