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Dark Demon Heart

Night falls and the demon rises.
Here to kill all the good inside.
Through the darkness he will hunt.
Your blood spills across the land.

Screaming aloud for your life,
but no one can hear you.
For the demon has taken your voice.
Let the dark tides come and
take your life.

All you know is now in the dark.
Screams you hear but can't save.
Your heart beats and blood fills your lungs.
Your choking on your own blood.

So let your heart be the DARK DEMON HEART.

Author notes

this is my first poem in a while so to all those who like my writing style please enjoy this would be option two

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  • Hebz
    June 20
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    interesting

    Thnx for entering & Best of Luck

    GloriousGift
    Hebz


  • Kari gold member
    June 5

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    Yikes! I'm not so sure though I'd want my heart to be the dark demon heart because that sounds very scary and painful.

    Well done on the imagery. You did good on your first poem!
    I encourage you to keep penning!

    Thanks for your entry

  • A very dark write indeed. A well written piece. It has some vivid imagery.
    May I ask, Was it written for napomo?
    Thank you for your entry