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Haiku-a-day – 4/22




lily petal
a dewdrop sits idle
  with moving sky



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  • Rowan gold member
    May 3
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    what a zen moment I had after reading this...
    thank you.


  • John Doe
    May 2

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    you really show the microcosm, macrocosm contrast on this one and contrast between stillness and movement. nice use of contrast in this haiku.


  • sorries
    April 23
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    this is great. Quite a vision too. thank you for entering.


  • azure85 gold member
    April 22

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    lily petal
    a dewdrop sits idle
    with moving sky

    A lovely reflection, and the beauty of spring so evident in your haiku.


  • Naughtygrlred
    April 22
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    its lovely...

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