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I Swear

Another bullet flies.


missing person papers
hit the street

 

Amber alerts flare

 

Will this be another
Romeo and Juliet story?

 

I promised until death do us part...

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word prompt :SEPARATION

In a list

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  • Gigglegasm gold member
    May 9

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    Excellence in brevity - I really enjoyed it. The way each stanza creates it's own separate image is great. And I loved the language used too.
    Fantastic work!


    Thanks for entering!
    Good luck.

    Michelle


  • maralisa silver member
    April 22

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    oh wow a fantastic take on the promt good luck in the contestmaralisa


  • AliceinPoetryLand gold member
    April 22

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    Excellent take on the prompt! You have a wonderful way with words