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smiles that sway;









She danced for dreamers, painting passion in each movement
& his lips twitched at the talent in toe, aglow
Her elegance sighed and favoured her flawless -
beautiful ballerina, bounce with the birds.











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Don't you know that rhythm is a dancer.

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  • Beautiful powerful words you have penned here. Thank you for keeping it short and sweet. Stunning. I truly am in awe with this piece. Thanks for entering and best of luck to you. Kahy


  • awannabepoet
    April 24

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    Wonderfull little rhyme you have penned and I can understand why you have earned all those trophies of gold, silver and bronze.

    I like it, I like it so!


  • Zenda-Lokki
    April 24

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    This is beautifully penned Midnight xx
    Paints a wonderful image in my minds eye that really captures a strong loving feeling.

    Thanks for sharing x


  • bonjourbunnie
    April 23

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    I love it. The internal rhyme is amazing, and I really enjoy the imagery that is used throughout.

    Good write

  • She danced for dreamers
    -there is so much beauty there, i don't even know where to start.

    this poem is so elegant and mysteriously glowing.

    magnificent.

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