You don't need to tell me that I'm falling
Madly, deeply and crazily in love with you,
I know that I'm only a bit unbalanced
but you don't need to point that out…
Little candy hearts and blood red ribbon
Crimson dye and matted hair
Is what I am,
Just ask…
They could say love is an addiction
No one wants to be healed from
You beg to differ haunted by the dark
Waiting for me to jump…
Little candy hearts and blood red ribbon
Crimson dye and matted hair
Is what I am,
Just ask…
All I want to be a part of you
Allowing you spirit to intwine with mine
You don't have to be alive
I love you not to hate you…
Little candy hearts and blood red ribbon
Crimson dye and matted hair
Is what I am,
Just ask…
Author notes
Prompt
http://i725.photobucket.com/albums/ww260/dragonfly7816/Comments/Art/goth318.jpg
I really like the picture but I found it really hard to put what I had in my mind onto the paper :S
In a list
A contest entry
- A Different Kind of Contest if You are Interested? by Sweet Impatience.
1500 points, ended May 2, 11 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Honesty is a must...
Comments
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ahhhhh, i officially love your writing
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Yay!!
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well I think you did a fantastic job with this prompt. you gave her a voice on that speaks beyond the dark. wow, excellent doesn't even begin to cover it. I really love the repeating lines:
"Little candy hearts and blood red ribbon
Crimson dye and matted hair
Is what I am,
Just ask…"
That adds to the intensity and power throughout this poem.. beautiful take on the prompt
good luck
kat
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A wonderful lyrical poem
the image Iater glanced at after reading
How brilliant
yougave her a voice
Love the thoughts within
best wishes and good luck
Julie
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