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Poetry Is a Loaded Gun...

Palate image 9mm Smith & Wesson

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  • Andi. gold member
    May 7
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    woo.
    couldnt be more true.


  • individuality gold member
    April 23

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    bullets fly through poetry's hair - russian roulette words stare in between the eyes as the trigger's pulled.


  • Night Hope gold member
    April 22

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    "Bang, bang, shoot, shoot." Moqui says it's overpriced. Try a Beretta 9000S. 40 caliber. Nice, short, powerful. Only around $800.

    I prefer a sword myself. Saw one in a pawn shop for $45 the other day. Damn near bought it, too.




  • Matt E. Smith gold member
    April 22
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    bang, bang.
    i shot you with my loaded words


  • hisaddiction
    April 22
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    I love it...cool!


  • Fox.
    April 22
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    yea.you never know what will pull the trigger either. badass bro.


  • sweet arrival gold member
    April 22

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    ooooo... one of my fav images by you
    that's why i keep the safety lock on mine

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