Sometimes I remember us,
and sometimes I smile.
Sometimes I remember us,
and sometimes I cry.
Sometimes I look at you,
and I I wonder why.
Sometimes I look at you,
and I feel sick inside.
Sometimes I try,
I want to catch your eye.
Sometimes I try,
but it's hard to.
Sometimes I wish,
but wishing isn't enough.
Sometimes I wish,
but it's always pointless.
Try and try as I might,
it never seems to work.
I'll never get you back,
and I don't think I need you back.
So you go have fun
laying among stars.
Have your laughs
and have you thrills.
Miss me?
Probably not.
Author notes
A friend's betrayal is worse than a lover's.
Sighh.
Stupiddd Ashoooo.D:
Comments
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ur right a friends betrayal is worse than a lovers. this is a really sad poem. i like the repetion and the ending although its sad its probably true
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im sorry that some people are just so stupid, do you want me to punch said person in the face? i like this poem. its sad. the ending is too.
Miss me?
Probably not
that's probably what has got to hurt the most. good job!
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Great Piece
I really like the repetition you used! I feel like it really gave something more to the poem. My favorite stanza's are the first two. Oh, and I found a typo or at least I think its a typo, "Sometimes I look at you, and I I wonder why." its supposed to be one "I" right?
Great Job!
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