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Let Go...

I have felt your eyes on me for some time now
I trace your body from across the room
I feel your thoughts through the crowd

Imagine …..
Lay down with me on a bed of silk,
Red as blood
Candles lit burn slowly
A soft scent fills the air of  longing
Look into my eyes, can you tell what I’m thinking?
Go slow, we have time on our side
Kiss me gently
Love me completly
The thirst of a thousand years is to strong to fight
Let the world unfold around us,
For we have warmer things to do
A quiet moment lasts forever
In your arms I am safe, satisfied
Your voice calls to me , softly
Your heart pulls me closer
I let myself fall, just this once
Let go of your worry and anger
And put me in it’s place.

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  • Lislaine
    April 28

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    Waw! This is amazing piece of poetry
    You sure have a great talent!!