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In the End


Upon my waking
The earth was shaking
Shattering - Breaking
Into little pieces beyond mending
The towers fell, and damsels cried
Truths were broken, heros died
Roses faded, withered, blew away
No one came to save the day.

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Ok so I just finished the 'Dark Tower' series by S. King (friggin' awsome) and it had the only perfect ending ever! I was worried about how it would end - had I invested so much of my time to be brought to a bitter, empty end? But bless him! It was perfect! I just love those books, they are my favorite EVER and so I wrote this during reading and thought I'd post it here while bragging on those perfect books.

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  • Its dark and srtaigh forward and i love it haha


  • Rheea gold member
    April 21
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    I think it stands on it's own as a lovely poem lol.