i feel a chill, the air is getting colder
i cannot remember a colder feeling
it is also so depressing, its like falling into a hole without sight, and
never hitting the bottom
it gets colder, and colder
it feels like im going crazy its so cold, so depressing..so miserable, so terrible and hurtfull...
its almost like dying
...and then i step away from the mirror...
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i came up with this, just out of nowhere to describe the way i feel when im depressed.
Im just wondering what people think about my poetry.
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I loved it!
I found myself wrestling a little with your repetitions
but you know what .......it really worked
when you read your final line.........
because depressions does feel that way....
like your a broken record stuck...and you're twisting
and trying to find a way to get back on track....
you know......what the professionals say:
thank gawd you have these feelings,
because if you didn't you'd be living with
the psychotics....psychotics never get depressed.
let alone have a soul like yours that is obviously
pretty damn powerful!
whenever I get stuck in the blues...
music,
ink and paper...I write ...
MY Bullshit LIst
the top ten things
that have me pissed off!
each day I would make myself do one thing
to cross something off that damn list!
I got to tell ya...it felt glorious to final burn
that list!
ears/Seattle
way to write.....
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ouch. depression is tough. been there. still there.
take it day by day. -
it is 'dying' with a 'y'. i like the imagery oh a hole with no bottom, that sense of vertigo. depression is tough. do things that make you happy. think of what you are grateful for not what you dont have.
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This is a great write. Yet, I'm so sorry that you feel this way. If you ever need to talk when you're feeling down, send me a note, or message! Its no problem to talk, because I love to listen.
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Its so depressing, I want to kill myself.
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