Here on the floor, everyone sits
As they draws pictures upon their wrists
Each pictures is different - drawn with a different knife
But each pictures is the same - getting rid of the same troubles in their life
Each strike of the knife - each detail of the pictures
Helps a fountain appear
And with this fountain our troubles disappear
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Written March 7th, 2004
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I like the pictures aspect of this, it's like the people drawing the pictures are drawing what they are feeling, their pain. And the pictures I think are the same because they have the same route pain. Well I may be talking out of my arse, but that is what I have got out of this poem.
That is another thing I like, the possiblity for multiple meanings, anyway, a great write.
Lewis
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