the strength of nature’s surprise comes with
heaven's breath blown over a lover's shoulders –
dirt-worthy metaphors crawling up exhaustion's neck,
and I just lie here waiting for the next storm to bring you back...
© Nublin’s Pub, 2009
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This is born of a simpler Ashcockian moment...
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It never ceases to amaze me how sensual and romantic nature can be....
"heaven's breath blown over a lover's shoulders"...
that, my friend, is beautiful.
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explains outdoor nudity, doesn't it? thanx...
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"heaven's breath blown over a lover's shoulder's" very sweet , passionate feel to this. Only a wordsmith can fashion this intricate labyrinth of words. Tecohe
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"dirt-worthy metaphors" is a great line!
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it appears to be the straightest line between breath and exhaustion.
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cool
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Ahhh..."The Perfect Storm". 
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i like this..
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nature is the best metaphor for life, for love...that is why we always return to nature, to the nature of love. I liked this, not only because i love stormy weather, but for the gentle breeze blowing off this page.
~ Nicolette
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Born of a simpler Ashcockian moment? For the sake of bearing my ignorance to the masses, what, pray tell is that?
Ignorance aside, I like the way this flows and the images it inspires even in all of its brevity.
♥ Touchof1der
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