When evil caught my eye
My troubles and pain increased I couldn’t kiss them goodbye
I suppose to make you happy but I made you cry
When I said my wish is to die.
You woke up so early in morning
Kept my lunch ready on the table & did everything,
The food you cook tastes so good
I suppose to give back the love but I’ve been rude.
You couldn’t see me in pain you couldn’t see me bleed
You did very you could for your kid.
You stayed up all night sacrificing your own sleep
Sorry mom but I said those words that hurt you so deep.
I ignored you everytime you came at my school
I know I made yourself feel like a fool.
All the time you been caring and supportive but I was blind
Sorry mom but I was and I am still with my teenage mind.
Nothing has changed, you still love and care for your little son
Sorry mom for every bad thing I said and done.
Your love for me cannot be measured nor explained
Sorry mom but I’m the one who always complained.
Author notes
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you Mom
A contest entry
- ONLY RHYME! by Beverlynohime.
800 points, ended April 25, 17 entries
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Great write!
I would be proud to be your mother, to have a son that cares enough to write such a poem!
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Nicely written. I think your mother would be very proud of it and I hope that you show her this!
Lovely piece.
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THIS WAS SO SWEET!!!!!!! i loved reading this! i have done this to my own mother, yet she loves me unconditionally as well. im so glad to know im not the only one who can treat my mom like crap and know that i can lean on her for whatever i need done. great write.
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Awwwwwh Shuberth this was really goood.
Such a loving write. I think she would like this if you ever show it to her, I loved the rhyme pattern you used every stanza seemed to flow well and there wasnt a bit I disliked about this poem. Very good work. True talent!
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wow this is really good and you make a good point and i havent ever treated my mom with respect
and i feel absolutley horribal about it but your mom sounds like she really loves you i love you to
love shawna
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