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mistake

The voices echo
she is the mistake!
An infant, pure and innocent
the love for her unconditional,
but yet there is a whole.
A whole that will never be filled.
A baby without a father;
a mother without a care,
but the love just grows more

Denied yet accepted
she is passed around like a disease
an uncurable infection
she and only she holds the truth
truth of the past, the present, and the future
she is damned to be resented
but only she holds the key to happiness

eyes dark, piercing like the abyss
she is loved and hated, the joy of life.
the father a whore, the mother unsure
but life moves on for the child
she will grow into her life with hatred
pain and anger, not for me or you
but at society, her voice will echo

society is mistaken, and the future holds true
poverty the incurable infection, a diesease of the mind...







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  • i love the contradictions in this. yet it holds truth for some.. great write. good luck and thx for entering

  • I love all the opposite line
    "Denied yet accepted"


  • Rashida
    May 6

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    This is a lovely and dark piece, the flow was very smooth, and altogether it was a good read.

    Typo in the last line, should be spelled "disease"

  • This was beautiful.... I loved it. It was sad but amazing.