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Lost

 

 

 

 

 

May you never keep

your

 

 

silent intruder.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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Ha, reminds me of a 'Confucius says:'

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  • sweet arrival gold member
    April 21

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    the mighty few words. THIS is the example for strength in brevity. with so much meaning if you just look... peel away.
    could it be voices in your head, intruding your thoughts, distracting you? i also saw it almost like a prayer... like may the road rise to meet you, but dark, like... may you never be haunted with demons. then the question is who or what is the intruder? rapist? past abuse? whatever it is. physically or mentally.
    this is a powerful write. thank you