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Evidence

Each moment of the day
Vivid visions of God appear
In the solitude of my day dreams
Death to the evil one
Enriched by pure silence
Night dreams are more vivid with
Christ's pure crystal light
Everyone must pray

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  • pozo
    May 12

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    Strong religious write, I like that it was an acrostic. By the way 'apear' should be 'appear'
    Thanks for commenting


  • Patpowers silver member
    May 9
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    I liked the last line Rev! THANKS for the message and the encouragement you bring. Take care!