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Sorry

Please don't shut me out
and cast me to the side;
For you touched my very soul,
and there you still reside.

I'm sorry if my caring
has caused you any pain;
I suppose that your face
I shall never see again.

I know what I felt
and surely could of been;
But I would like to settle
for at least being your friend.

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What else can I say? You know who you are....

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  • robert bolin
    July 6
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    sorry forgot to applaud


  • robert bolin
    July 6
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    your words can move mountains and seas
    Painting a picture of forgiveness
    I love this poem


  • SteveS gold member
    May 8
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    Wow! Good thoughts. I could apply this poem in my life as, I'm sure, many others could as well. The mood is translated throughout consistently. Started with great rhythm when read aloud. I feel it lost some of that rhythm in the line...I suppose that your face...and perhaps change "could of been" to "could have been" IMHO. Great write.