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A Special Place

Somewhere upon the wind,
Beyond where I can fly,
Where love will never end,
And hope will never die.

There’s a special place,
That only I can find,
Where your smiling face,
Never fades from my mind.

You may have gone away,
Somewhere that I can’t see,
I think of you each day,
Your always here with me.

Wherever I may go,
A place we’ll never part,
You’re a special hole,
Right here within my heart.


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Written 3/22/2009

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  • This is lovely!! Special people can surely create a place within us that when they leave, leaves a hole.
    Love the quatrains, rhyme and background.


  • agazeley gold member
    May 9

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    This is Beautiful . .


    A wonderful little poem, But I am not so sure that you are referring to a place "Beyond where you can fly . ." as you seem to have flown there beautifully . .

    Albert.

  • Tempa Lee
    April 27

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    it brought a tear to my eye when i read this because when i read it i thought of my uncle that just passed. it just brought back some special memories. it was really beautiful. great job!!! and you wrote it on my birthday so that's good too.



    ~Dani~


  • PurpleSky
    April 22

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    I know that special little person you are refering to here and just know that God listens to your heart as you have written it out here. Know that with God all things are possible and never give up! wonderful, heartfelt write my dear friend. I love ya oodles
    huggles
    Lena