My tender little fairy
with rose petal wings
covered in transluscent dust,
you are my addiction.
My caloused hands could never caress you
and my pale lips never tasted yours,
but I will bet that they are the sweetest
in this forest of enchanted blue dew.
Crucifix of ebony and ivory
keeps me locked in this asylum
where the lillies grow in damp quarters
reminiscent of the past times.
Corrosive acid will not break my bars
and my chains are just as strong
but I will escape this nightmare carousel
and ride life with you, once again.
Perform the exorcism of devine intervention
and save me if you can, little fairy.
Bring me the morphine to ease my ails
and stare in horror at what I have become.
Sunrise sleeps for me, as night stays awake.
I never get to see sunset beyond these walls
and the wolves are howling mad
tearing at flesh causing their fur to turn auburn.
Crystal moon is a crystal ball
gazing into our future
so clouded, an unpurified diamond,
forboding the worst to come for us.
My bones ache and are protruding from my skin.
The crescent of my ribs beat
with what little warmth my heart still has,
warmth for my sickened desires.
When I am free, I shall find you
and we will shoot to the stars
with that elongated needle filled to the brim
with stardust cocaine.
We will be high....
Author notes
Blar.
In a list
A contest entry
- Prewrite contest by Sadistic klown girl.
1000 points, ended June 2, 155 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - I must be insane. PREWRITES! by borrowing.moonlight.
720 points, ended July 30, 83 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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this was too... i dont know ... long maybe? for me to read completely. i could tell it was really nicely written but i couldnt finish it. thanks for the entry and i liked the ending by the way.
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"Sunrise sleeps for me, as night stays awake.
I never get to see sunset beyond these walls
and the wolves are howling mad
tearing at flesh causing their fur to turn auburn.
Crystal moon is a crystal ball
gazing into our future
so clouded, an unpurified diamond,
forboding the worst to come for us.
My bones ache and are protruding from my skin.
The crescent of my ribs beat
with what little warmth my heart still has,
warmth for my sickened desires.
When I am free, I shall find you
and we will shoot to the stars
with that elongated needle filled to the brim
with stardust cocaine.
We will be high...."
Wonderful I really like these lines they express a great deal of emotion and have such a great flow as does the entire poem Thank you for sharing this with us. -
amazing i loved this write and the fact that u use3d the entire word back and still created such a beautiful and unique poem is astounding thank you so much fofr entering and goo luck sweetie
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Very powerful piece. The ending was unexpected, but a big JOLT to the reader. I like poetry like that. This is such an epic! I hope that you place well in the contest.
I honestly could not tell that this piece was created using a word bank, but I love that about it! Very nice work.
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wowee!
oohhhh caloused hands!! eww
this is beautifully worded yet in a dark way with deep meaning to it .. This captured me and i really dont know why xx
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Oh wow.... you got that from a wordbank? I am impressed! I've only done wordbanks once or twice, but they are tricky. Great job, hun! I especially love the second stanza.
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Oh wow
Totally awesome as it is brilliant
that a thought the image of words paint each stanza
vivid as ever
best wishes hun
Julie
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Incredible write!!!!
What a jewel this is.
You have done an incredible job here my friend.
Bravo!!
Your talent shines.
This is one of my favorites by you.
Thanks for sharing this one.
The very best to you in this contest.
Love Peace
campanaro
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Wow, your vocabulary is amazing in this, it just gets you from start to finish. Great job on this
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