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The Eventual Eternal Goodbye

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After so many farewells and grateful greetings,
these empty eons of time;
month after grueling month
where fantasies raise ugly yet beautiful visions
and loss drains my memories, one strip of hide after another ~

Oh, God, your beautiful face.  Why can’t I remember your beautiful face?
I cannot taste you, smell you on old clothes I have in the closet,
feel the smooth tanness of your skin against mine ~

I am terrified at these chinks of forgetting
that leave empty spaces where you used to be.





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  • Aussie Gypsy gold member
    April 25

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    I can relate to this piece in my heart. You capture the absolute sadness at forgetting love. I enjoyed this so much. Best to you in the contest