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sorry ain't working

i cant say
sorry anymore
because it doesn't
even really work.
i tried to fix it
but there is nothing
i can really
do because its your
problems not mine.
i've lived to learn
you and i can't take it
anymore the lies,the deciet,
the shame. it isn't what i want
anymore because truly it was
all a game and
im hitting the off button.
i don't know if we will ever be
but as of right now
the game is over and
maybe one day i'll be able to 
press restart..

constuctive comments please

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  • awe, such a sad poem. I hope you get what your looking for in the end, everyone deserves to be happy I really liked this poem, keep on writing !