Screamed problems
Sprinkled promises
I told you to hold on
and even when I hurt you;
You were never gone
I said sorry
a thousand times
and you swayed along
with my
decieveing chimes
You can't say I treated you well
You can't say I deserve a gold
You can't say much about me
Because I was so damn cold
But I wanted you to hold on
and that's what you did
Caring for me was your only weakness
I called you every night
and told you what I had done
and you sat and listened
but never won
You gave me advice
when I was going down
but I never said one thank you
I was never around
You can't say I treated you well
You can't say I deserve a gold
You can't say much about me
Because I was so damn cold
But I wanted you to hold on
and that's what you did
Caring for me was your only weakness
But one night
you had enough
you hung up the phone
cursing me and my so called
"love"
You finally know
what is and isn't true
You know I am a bitch
and that I still don't deserve you
You can't say I treated you well
You can't say I deserve a gold
You can't say much about me
Because I was so damn cold
But I wanted you to hold on
and that's what you did
Caring for me was your only weakness
So you can't say
You can't say
You can't say
you didn't care...
Author notes
Scars- Papa Roach
I still love you Nate♥
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Comments
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They held on and loved you dearly it sounded like. This is wonderfully written and it was very much a pleasure to read.
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thank you
Chas♥
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