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The one by my side
Is the one I can't shake
She's on of a kind
I won't let you take

She'll make you laugh
Until you cry
But if you show her math
She'll make like a fly

She'll make you smile
Until your cheeks hurt
But if your out of style
She'll call it dirt

She's the best person
You can ever meet
She's the best friend
You can never cheat

She's my best friend
So don't break her heart
Because to get to her
You have to go through me

She's my sister
My friend
The one I love
The one that made my life...

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Author notes

This was wrote for my best friend
who is also my sister!!
Love you sis!!

Point out what you like and what you don't like. Any typos please message me. Please don't put them in the comments.

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  • This was great. A true best friend/sister poem. It made me grin, and I'm sure whoever you wrote it for appreciates it. Great job and keep up the writing!!


  • Skooter102004
    April 21

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    Nice job

    So don't break her heart
    Because to get to her
    You have to go through me

    I would hate to be the person who breaks her heart bc then I would have to go through u
    omg Thats really scary Dont hurt me plz!!!!!!!!!! hahahaha thanks The day some man hurts my sis he would have to move out of the country!!!!!!!!!! jkjk

  • I LOVE YOU!!!

    This poem was totally about me!
    I love you sis!
    Allie, I love the line where you said I hahte math, cuz i do!
    lol
    I also like the part where you wrote
    if you're out of style she'll call it dirt!

    That was totally awesome!
    I love you much!

    Tank you!
    Love,

    ~Trill~

  • Skooter102004
    April 21
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    Nice Job

    I hope thats not me you are refering too!!! Allie!!


  • dabpunx
    April 21

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    this is so pure and beautiful. im so happy you are best friends with your sister, i am best friends with my brother too! line 3 has a small typo just add an 'e' but this was wonderful!

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