From day one, I knew what it was
I saw potential, as all others did
It was the spark that I saw in those baby blues
The illuminating flash of white in his smile
I was hooked- addicted if you will.
Although he warned me of crippling OD,
I failed to listen to the sting of garbled English-
Caught up in the melody of his voice.
Two years long,
Our game continues still
With promises of love one-sided and yet-
He promises he cares
And saves me from my fall...
A glorified knight in silver armor
With endless cerullean seas.
But if I fall, as oft I do...let me fall, in midnight's blue.
He's the perfect drug-
The smoothest heroin
It's hard to be hung over when the high just never ends.
A contest entry
- Let's share our souls and our words... by SummerlandRayne.
899 points, ended April 28, 8 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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WOW!!! You took this line to a wonderful place! I adore this verse...it is full of honesty and such passion. It is an honor to have my words meld with yours in this wonderful poem!!!
Az


