Your kisses were
soft fig slices
brushed against
fresh crêpes,
tastes of you
will linger sweet
upon my lips
tomorrow.
© Oisin
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Edited just because~
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I haven't had a fresh fig in years...Lovely penning, Scribe. Simply edible.


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Amazed, as I always am...you are a very talented poet!

Az

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beautiful . i love how the poem lingers in your head , tomorrow , it suggest so much . something to look foward to !


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very beautiful. i love your sensual food poems.


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A sweet tooth, hmmmm? This one sounds very delicious, very tasty. Some tastes stay with us - make us want to enjoy more of it/them.... Lovely, especially the combination of food and flesh here!
~ Nicolette


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