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Crêpes


Your kisses were
soft fig slices
brushed against
fresh crêpes,

tastes of you
will linger sweet
upon my lips
tomorrow.



© Oisin

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  • Night Hope gold member
    April 27

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    I haven't had a fresh fig in years...Lovely penning, Scribe. Simply edible.

  • Amazed, as I always am...you are a very talented poet!


    Az

  • risho
    April 21

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    beautiful . i love how the poem lingers in your head , tomorrow , it suggest so much . something to look foward to !


  • tara wilson gold member
    April 21
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    very beautiful. i love your sensual food poems.


  • Nicolette gold member
    April 21

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    A sweet tooth, hmmmm? This one sounds very delicious, very tasty. Some tastes stay with us - make us want to enjoy more of it/them.... Lovely, especially the combination of food and flesh here!

    ~ Nicolette

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