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I don't know why

And I don't know why
I'm trying so hard
to see the truth
behind your eyes.
Maybe it's because
I really believe in us
and I want this
to work out.

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I've looked around a bit, & didn't find anything, but I'm not sure if these are lyrics from some one else. I just wrote it up at school today. But they do sound a lot like a song I heard some where. What do you guys think? Please let me know. Thanks.

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  • Nuclear
    April 21
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    I just googled your poem and didn't find it anywhere, so I think you are safe. It is yours. I can see a couple sitting in two different class at school, and one of the two is writing this. It may be short and the words are used often, but I feel the emotion behind it. I know quite a few people who have written similiar things, and I always like the turn out.