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She Feels

Tears spill down onto the page
As she wishes she weren’t at this stage.
These feelings she knows all too well
She’s slipping into her personal hell.

Her pain is real
Emotions she cannot reveal.
All she wants is to disappear
But she can’t and that’s her biggest fear.

Loneliness clouds over her
These days past by in such a blur.
She wishes she could catch a break
Locking feelings away is her mistake.

Life is such an endless fight
And she holds on with all her might.
Her strength is fading fast
because she keeps living in the past.

Always feeling misunderstood
Will cause her to leave for good.
Constantly feeling unconnected
Is because of all the times she’s been rejected.

This is what she feels

Author notes

its pretty rough, thats because it just what i was feeling and i'm still new to rhyming... comments/advice appreciated

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  • angelsslayer
    April 29

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    "Her strength is fading fast
    because she keeps living in the past."

    Love that part. The poem was heartfelt and I could easily connect with it. You're a great writer.