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Angels For Sale

Hunger on display
              Little wings as models;
The only thing that soars
              Their white feather future.

Apples for angels
              Compassion for the world;
The only thing we’ll lose
              Our selfish seeds we’ve sown.

Empathy as coins
              To feed our tomorrow;
The only thing to do
              Buy hunger on display.


Author notes

small voices...big screams...stop child hunger

photo taken from http://noisho.deviantart.com/art/famine-21975300

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  • Rose Angel gold member
    May 27

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    Oh so worthy of a trophy...This contest is one I had missed, but you have expressed between the picture and your descriptive imagery, and thought provoking lines...what the world and each one of us need to hear...Thank you for this write...and congrats for the honorable mention!


  • Kathraina silver member
    May 1

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    Stunning job on this piece.
    Strong imagery here. So much said in so few words.
    Brilliant! Thank you for taking the time to enter, it's a subject close to my heart.
    Bravo

    ♥ Kate