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Forgotten

Don't Forget
All those silly kissing lessons
All the nights spent talking
All the moments left unforgotten...
Don't Forget
I won't forget...

Did you forget
Everything we ever had?
Did you forget
I was even alive?
Don't Forget
I won't forget...

Do you regret
Ever standing by my side
And now I'm left
To be Forgotten
Don't Forget
I won't forget...

How did we go wrong?
Our love was magical
Fairy Tales weren't as good.
But now I guess
This is where we have to stand.
Never again...
So don't forget
I won't forget...

We were just about to fall
Even more in Love
Don't Forget
I won't Forget
About Us...

We were once so strong
Nothing could tear us apart
Rocks weren't as stable.
Did it last?
All the pictures have been burned
And all the past is just a lesson
To be learned.
Don't forget
I won't forget...

Our love was like a song...
But you won't sing along...
I won't forget...
But You've forgotten...
About us...

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Inspired By Don't Forget by Demi Lovato

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Comments

  • Ohhh. It just happens I love this song! Its a very emotional piece, and you reflected the song very well. The only constructive criticism I can give, is that I believe you used the lyrics a bit too much. Other than that, beautiful!


  • Maggie Kay gold member
    April 21
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    love your last three lines. very touching very deep and emotional.
    good work


  • AsheAngel
    April 21
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    AWWWWWWWWW so sweet and I think I know the song you used ^_-