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Run

We must run from death,
He shall divide us into pieces of loneliness.
And whilst one spirit may thrive
Embraced by eternity,
One shall die a victim of mortality.

Awaken- and let colour fill these eyes
And purpose fill these veins;
There's no time to rest.

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  • LilyRose
    April 25

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    Invigorating truth, your words bridge the edge of an inner void that ponders the darkness with life - though I tend to curse angrily during those moments


  • Ami
    April 21

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    what song is it inspired by?

    Great Write and
    Thank You for entering my contest
    Good Luck
    -♥Amanda♥


  • individuality gold member
    April 21

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    you better run, run, you better run... ah death, it has fast legs and always catches us in the end. a good poem.