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[ Fourteen dollars and some change ]

Fourteen dollars and some change
in his pocket.
Half a pack of cigarettes holding it down.
And with that, his life savings, he set out
boots shuffling through the last dirt
anyone would ever see them tread upon.
Trailing smoke and tears,
he disappeared into the sunset.

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  • unbeliever101
    April 22

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    damn. great imagery.

    i like the personal irony that you wrote this on my bday when my life was going to shit


    • Quetzalcoatl
      April 23
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      i'm sorry darlin... if it makes you feel any better, my life went to shit on my bday too! We need to chill sometime, it really has been too long.


      • unbeliever101
        April 23
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        call me, then. i'm only 20 mins away and i love to drive

        • Quetzalcoatl
          April 24
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          i think i might've lost your number... a lot of things disappeared when i moved outta the house. message me with it?