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Stuck In Between

I'm stuck
Here
In between
What I know
And what I want
No way for me to choose
How am I supposed
To make a choice
Like this
It's impossible
I can't do this
Help me decide
Help me
Help me choose
What I want
Help me to pick
What I want to be
Because I'm just
Stuck in between

Author notes

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Prompt:
13.) http://www.flickr.com/photos/jaeming/3384401699/

Don't ask me how I came up with this.

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  • new born
    April 21

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    i wish you would have gone a bit more in depth with the picture and told a story rather than merely stating 'depressed' in poetic form. however, this does have a nice flow & your wording was pretty good. thanks for entering. :]


  • soulchild22
    April 21

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    this is simple realistic and well expressed.
    keep up the good work and i like how u end wit the twilight tinggy... do enjoy ur day and all the best hope to hv a few comments from u!