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The Love For A Butterfly

       Sparkling wings                                 of shiny color
        flutter by,bright                             colors catch my
        eye, Such beautiful            ʅ ʃ           butterflies,I can't
         deny,soaring through         ØØØ         the sky ,oh so high
          They take flight every     ØØØØØ       July,and take land
            on the pink azeala     ØØØØØØØ    bush nearby,They
         Drink sweet nector,notØØØØØØØa one is shy,The glow
      Of their wings againstØØØØØØØthe sun in the sky
             wishing i couldØØØØØØØhave it as  pet
                   I sigh,to holdØØØØØØØand cuddle one,oh
        my,The obsession forØØØØØØØØbutterflies,I can't
             lie,My goodness the    ØØØØØØØ    the love for a small
            creature,such as a         ØØØØØØ       butterfly,Oh how I
               sigh,Into the air it          ØØØØØ          passes me by, My
            heart skips  the               ØØØØ              ultimate beats
              On the wings                 ØØØ                 of color,Shiny
              blitz,Shine                     ØØØ                  on ,Butterfly
                Ø   

 

 

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  • Poetic-Theorem gold member
    November 25
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    This is perhaps the best "shape poetry" that I've see on this site
    The poem is excellent as well, which is very hard to in this case
    Bravo ...thanks for sharing...David

  • ksenia juggalette
    September 17
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    Ooh I liker the shape!!


  • Sheilasbabygal4life gold member
    September 11

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    This was a really good poem. I like how you made a butterfly out of it as well. Thanks for entering my contest and best of luck to you!


  • AngelBellerose gold member
    September 7

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    well penned hun I love the shape of this poem
    and words display you have penned a smile this day
    thank you hun hugs Angel♥


  • intanglio2ring
    September 6

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    Wonderful!!!

    What a beautiful butterfly - and it seems like its not the only thing you've captured. Your rhyme and flow take of an airy feel as this poetry piece flies high! Definitely captured my attention and respect!
    (wonders why its not in a contest. . . Hmmm!)
    Tang


  • Night Hope gold member
    September 6

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    Very cool, Amanda.


  • Swangrnv gold member
    August 16

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    WOW

    WOW WOW!! Outstanding piece, and a beautiful shape of one of natures most beauitful creatures the butterfly.. i'm very very impressed lady, and yes it's a top FAV!


    • Jade.Butterfly gold member
      August 16
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      Thank you so much.
      I worked and worked on this forever..
      I finally got it to come together though.
      Now I have to find other forms to work with..
      I hate to be modest but i would have to say i am quite proud of myself with this one!


  • glenn shannon silver member
    August 16

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    wat clever arrangement love it well done hun. your so clever

    • Jade.Butterfly gold member
      August 16
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      Thank you, honey!!
      This was a hard one to do..
      I worked on it forever but i finally got it to work to the way i wanted it!!
      I have to admit i am quite proud of it.


  • penman gold member
    August 14

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    Excellent

    Oh my what a beautiful creation. So very pretty in use of form. And the great wording. Thank you for sharing

  • i think youve done a brilliant rmodel of this beautiful poem the layout gives it the feel of flight and its just fantasic i love it and you of course glenn

  • dont house him he needs to be free so he can soar he only lives a week or so how horrid to not complete his jouney beatiful light write. youre one


  • Ice Queen
    April 23
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    good poem, I love butterflies. The background even matches, wonderful job.


  • trekkergirl
    April 20

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    ahhh to have an obession for something so beautiful and so delicate as a butterfly. This is a good write. I liked it. And I think that you picked a good background for it as well. Good job

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