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Analytical thoughts on analyzing pieces,
Editorial on  polished writes,
and we think we are above,
With a Gin.
That's all we do, isn't it
look at things and try new drinks?

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  • NothingButShrooms
    May 10

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    i liked it. it feels like there should be more though. the repetition of analytical/analyzing stuck out to me .
    but over all a nice piece.

  • Judith Chandler
    April 21
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    Nice write, made me smile.