Looking into your eyes
I see my life
Reflecting in every touch
In every kiss
In every hug
Every touch,
Sends chills down my spine
Makes the hairs on the back of my neck
Stand on end
Gives me goose bumps
Every kiss,
Gives me an electric shock
Makes me want more
Screams your Love for me
Gives me butterflies
Every hug,
You hold me tight
Which tells me you won't let me go
That you want no one else
I'm your only one
These memories I will never forget
Wishing this was now and not then
Your eyes no longer locked on mine
And no longer reflecting
What was once true Love.
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This was absolutely beautiful Allison, I could see this as a song too
best of luck in the contest
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Great Job
Nice Allie!!
Every touch,
Sends chills down my spine
Makes the hairs on the back of my neck
Stand on end
Gives me goose bumps
That's what happens too me with the person I love!
Keep on writing Bc I sitting here reading -
I completely and totally relate to this poem...its so sad and brings back memories I wish to forget..but you didn't have a twist?
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Great Write!
I enjoyed the line where you said
"Every kiss,
Gives me an electric shock"!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Great line,
and if ANY boy hurts you I will hurt them!
And if this is about your first boyfriend!
I know his name!
lol jk
Love ya!
~XoxoXoxoXoxo~
Sincerely,
~Trill~
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wow. i have these feeling too about my first love. it has been a long time but sometimes the heart especially in memories and dreams i feel this what you captured like a photograph with words.
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