take away my life
when the world is crashing down
take away my life
when we're all about to drown
take away my life
when everything is going wrong
take away my life
when they tell me to go on
take away my life
when everything seems fine
take away my life
when living just takes time
take away my life
because i cannot survive
take away my life
i never wanted to be alive
take away my life
you're never ever here
take away my life
i don't even seem to care
i'm still waiting
i'm still waiting
why is nothing ever happening
i look at you
you look at me
i can see you
can you see me?
please don't hate me for leaving
i know you wont be grieving
when i'm not there
'cause you don't care
they say fairy tales have a happy ending
my didn't, death is pending
the truth i want to bend
into the sunset at the end
i guess i didn't get the lucky clover
cause now my story's over
now it's just a knife
so take away my life
Author notes
this really needs some work....but i decided to just toss it in with the rest of my trash-worthy crap....it doesn't make any difference....just some more comments
I'd love to know what you think..am I good for my age?
Comments
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Yes, you are.
This is a good use of repetition that says quite a bit and I understand hving these type of feelings.
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You're pretty good for your age. ^.^ I think it's pretty good.
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