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Lord, If You Took Me Now

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Lord, if you took me now I’d be a happy man
Lord, if you took me now I’d be a happy man
I’ve seen enough,
Got no place to go,
I’ve taken all that I can

Lord, if tomorrow never came I wouldn’t shed no tear
Lord, if tomorrow never came I wouldn’t shed no tear
With the life I’ve lived
Death ain’t nothing to fear

I held on through the darkest nights for a bright new day
I prayed, Lord, a little hope was gonna come my way
But now the verdict’s in
And there’s just one thing left to say

Lord, if you took me now I’d be a happy man
Lord, if you took me now I’d be a happy man
Now the writing’s on the wall
I’ve taken all that I can

I walked a long cold mile in another man’s shoes
I told myself I wouldn't ever sing the blues
But now the page has turned
And so I’ve learned I was born to lose

Ain’t got no woman, and I ain’t got no pride
Ain’t got nothing but this emptiness inside
If I could just believe I was wrong
I’d hold on, and Lord knows I’ve tried

I tried to drown my sorrow and I came up dry
I got so low I couldn’t even get high
And so I’m lying here
With no tears left to cry

Lord, if you took me now I’d be a happy man
Lord, if you took me now I’d be a happy man
I hear the curtains call
And I’ve taken all that I can

Author notes

Here's something for the man with nothing.

I still intend to record an instrumental arrangement for this, but that won't be until I buy a new guitar and brush up on my playing - still, nothing so lonely as an a capella.

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  • Heroesrox
    October 13
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    I honestly did not see the youtube thing up there, but now, I'm listening and it's fantastic!

    Awesome!!!


  • Heroesrox
    October 13

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    You comment on my works with such high praise, but then I get to yours and discover that it deserves something eevn better than what you said about my works.

    Marvelous write. Truly. One day, I'd love a CD. Hehe!

  • sounds somewhere between a gospel hymn and a blues anthem... great job!!! i love the sound and the words have a nice flow...your voice was a nice extra bonus...your kind of voice is perfect for this song...continue the work!!!

  • ...amazing...



    speachless

  • Tte
    April 28

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    Dammit, why couldn't I write like this. Your voice & lyrics, sent shivers down my spine.
    I had wrongly assumed you meant that recording wise you'd have instruments ie "a full on song" Forget that & my other comments. Your voice is the only instrument needed. Sheer brilliance. You got talent.


  • kay-poetry09
    April 25
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    wow,

    this is intense. i like it.

  • nice


  • dabpunx
    April 20

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    tragically beautiful. the audio was amazing great voice and i feel your pain. good luck. you should be a blues singer if you're not already.

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