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Slipping(1)

I'm lost in the dark
And the loneliness
Of my own soul

It captures me
And brings me in
And then it takes my heart
And rips it apart

I'm always wishing
For a new start

I put myself in my head
When there are things
That I dread

I go into the darkness
For some time to myself
And then I think of stuff
And life it's self

I'm always alone
And in the dark
Because my soul does not live

It let's me alone
Because I have nothing to give

Slowly I am slipping
Away from life

And my mind is growing dark
I have this place to myself
But it is lonely
Without life  

It is time to get a grip

But slowly I am slipping
Away from my life

Slipping....

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Written March 7th, 2004

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  • Jenn Lynn
    March 13, 2004
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    don't slip to much you might fall and hurt yourself
    Lovez, ~*Jemmy