When that tickling infection
Grabs you by the sides and squeezes
The depressed, damp air straight out
Until you’re gasping for the light,
Contagious love.
Giggle another breath
To emphasise the innocent emotion
Through your damaged, cracked body.
Inhaling illumination,
Succulent softening solution,
Holding your renewed soul,
Caressing your now eternal essence,
Mingling spirits in the heat of passion,
With infatuated, dreamy eye lids
Until we part, panting for pause,
Then, addicted, begin the sensation
Of that tickling infection.
Author notes
Yay shortest poem, and a happy poem [dear god] so yeh out of my normal comfort zone, hope you like as im not that good at happy poems 
i seem to be overly cliche, i hope i added unique stuff in there
Please tell me how to improve
Thanks!
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i really liked this line! "Giggle another breath
To emphasise the innocent emotion
Through your damaged, cracked body." emphasizes how good it feels, the whole poem was pretty amazing nice work!
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