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I am more me with you,
Than me alone,
Whoever that me may be.
The male or the woman,
Or the mix of the two,
I am more me with you.
As confused as can be,
But more so accepting,
I am calmer of discovering,
Who I might really be.
Still I am more me with you,
Than me alone,
And without you,
I wouldn't have known,
The me that I hid so long ago.

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  • hawkeslake gold member
    April 20

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    One of the best aspects of real love is that it helps us become the best, most whole, person we can be, the most "me" one can be... this is a well-crafted poem describing that wonderful effect. Lita