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if love is what it is.

I see your face
our eyes they meet,
but then you look
down to your feet.

Is it me
my breath my hair,
why wont you just
stop and stare.

I know you like me
well i think you do,
im just gonna come
and talk to you.

If you ignore me
ill be persistent,
even if that means
keeping distant.

The fact is I love you
always have always will
the truth is i need you
your sure sence of thrill.

We've been band from eachother
by sheer will and power,
but we can stop it
in just a short hour.

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