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taking down Troy

lucid arguments
bring me to the surface
of my thoughts
i wake up slowly
my words like lead
my tongue like wood
you have already formed
perfect sentences of rage
burning down my troops
in a tirade
but my wooden horse
is creaking up to
your mighty fortress
snail paced
but oh so lethal

just

you

wait

Author notes

meh.
i needed to write something.

assume nothing

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  • A falling star
    April 20
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    I like it. Especially the ending. I like the images and the metaphor.
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