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God Rules (Harrisham Rhyme)






Angels navigate souls' to Heaven's gate
seraphic songs breathe saving graces.
Circling divinity's aura infused with love so great,
guardian hands carry purity within powerful embraces.
Never shall flames of evil claim angelic fate,
righteous ever is the creator across all times and spaces.








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Harrisham Rhyme

This form consists of a six-line rhyming stanza.
In this form, the last letter of the first word of each line is the first letter of the first word of next line.
There is no restriction on the starting letter of the first line.

Rhyming scheme : ababab.

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  • Harrisham Minhas
    April 27

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    Words about the goodness of angels and the heavens have been nicely expressed here.

    Thanks for your entry.

    Harrisham Minhas


  • drifting cloud silver member
    April 26
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    Nicely done. You have a way with words painting a picture that is felt as well.


  • Rovingone gold member
    April 20

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    Such a fantastic description of the beauty of the heaven that awaits and the meeting with the heavenly father.


  • penman gold member
    April 20
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    Excellent

    So very spiritual and with great images. A masterful use of the from. Best of luck in the contest.


  • individuality gold member
    April 20

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    a poem full of smiles and spiritual flutters, like ribbons in a breeze, the light is caught and waved inside-outside - a good poem.

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