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My beloved spoke to me

My Beloved Spoke to me
"Rise my love and come with me;
See the place prepared for you,
Feed yourself on Hermon's dew;
Fountain gardens built for thee,
Rise my love and come with me,"

Now my soul doth rest in peace,
Living waters never cease;
Lebanon streams satisfy,
Fountain gardens please my eye;
Floods of water cannot quench
Love so strong it is my strength.

No I'm not the original writer of this piece but it really hit my heart

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  • lord zero
    August 17

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    not being the original write still makes the peace work for you i rather enjoyed it it was great were did you find it good work none the less your or not it's on your page for a reason so ya good work and keep at it ^_^


  • Treasure 5 gold member
    April 20

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    This is such a wonderful piece, it touched my heart. Fountain gardens thats awsome. This s a pleasure to read.


  • Linaness
    April 20

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    Wow, I can understand how this would hit your heart. It's such a great, intense, sweet poem.
    Thanks for putting it on your page for others to read.
    Such a wonderful peace, and fills me with a certain sense of tranquility.
    It's great =]