How can I tell you
that i'm feeling alone?
Living with knowing
you were loved
in someone else's home.
I wasnt there
to share your laughs
to heal your wounds
or watch you grow
through each photograph
How can I tell you
the words"I love you"
that I long to hear it in return
just knowing
that you feel the same too
I savor each moment
that I spend with you
Wondering if deep inside
you are happy to be here
or preferring those who raised you
How can i take back
all the mistakes that i've made
Starting all over
from the beginning
before they took you away....
Author notes
a work in progress unfinished. suggestions welcome. this is just a rough draft but didnt want to save it in the draft section.
after 13yrs of searching my son found me on the computer while i waited and searched for him as well. now the search is over.
Comments
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Hmmm
I don't like the part that starts with I savor... It almost has a love/romantic sound to it at first, except in that part though, so it feels necessary... I don't know if this helped at all... but that part just seemed a bit cleeshay...
~Alie
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thanks,
i have considered your suggestion and do agree with you, and will revise that part later when more corrections are made. thanks for taking time ro read.
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