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When clock strikes 10 pm

When clock strikes 10 pm,
My heart starts sinking deep,
To remember the exact time,
When the kindest personality was sitting,
On sofa, after recitation and prayers,
Busy in chatting with his life partner,
Making plans of future days,
Remembering his eldest son,
Showering love to all other children too,
Delaying his supper, praying to God,
For the better days for his children and home,
When immediate cardiac arrest snatched the noble man,
From his family, from his eldest son, from his spouse and children,
His family mourned, his friends cried,
His cousins wept, his colleagues sobbed,
And his eldest son, still busy in shedding his tears,
And writing poem for his great father, having so many perils,
Regarding the time,
Whenever at night the clock strikes 10....
He reminds Mr. Syed Ijmal Haider Zaidi,
The wonderful personality, the kindest father!!! 

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  • Emotions
    April 28
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    heart melting

    your words are pathetic, but wonderful and heart melting beautiful oem however

  • twentytwenty
    April 23
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    ten o clock

    great tribute to your great father dear mujtaba; i am deeply impressed!

  • Blue Eyed Boy
    April 21

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    Awesome!

    Awesome and great poem my dear, which shows son's love for his great father. May Mr. Ijmal Haider Zaidi rest in heaven!