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If This is Life, Life Won't Be Missed

AS I DISAPPEAR AMUNGST THE CROWD
MY EYES WELT UP, MY TEARS GROW LOUD

ALONG THE DARKENED ROAD I TRAVEL
WITHIN MYSELF A FOREIGN BATTLE

TO TRUST THE MAN I LOVE THE MOST
OR TO BE OF HIM AS IF A GHOST

MY HEART GROWS BLACK MY MIND NOW EMPTY
ITS ME, MYSELF ALONE WITHIN ME

AS THE DEMONS TRY TO DRAG ME DOWN
THE TEARS THEY FALL UPON MY SADDENED FROWN

THE PUDDLES GROW, THE RED GETS DEEPER
I SOON WILL MEET MY GOD MY KEEPER

A WHISPER ECHOS THROUGHOUT MY BODY
I FEEL THE PAIN INFLICTED UPON ME

WITH ONE LAST THOUGHT AND ONE LAST SLIT
IF THIS IS LIFE, LIFE WON'T BE MISSED.

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  • LordMaccie
    April 20
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    I could really feel the emotion here!