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stay strong

 

In your weakness, He is strong.

[Hang on, stay strong]

When it feels like life is leaving you,

grab it by the feet and tell it to stay with you.

 

I believe that there is more to this.

Past the tears and pain, God is glorified.

I don't know if you feel the same way,

but whether or not you do,

 

stay strong.

 

We need you.

They need you.

 

 

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for Liam, don't just give up
Always remember God loves you

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  • 2lullabyhaven
    May 22
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    Wonderful words of encouragement-thanks for your entry


  • Three Doves
    April 28

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    Perfectly stated and structured pleasing to both the eyes and heart. Much power in your chosen words which gives God the Glory.
    In God's Love
    Three Doves


  • Candy Morphine
    April 21

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    [Hang on, stay strong]
    - i really like the effect this gives. especially with the word 'strong' repeated in the line prior to that and also later on in bolded text.


  • BearWoman gold member
    April 21
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    This is a very strong encouragement. Nice write.


  • Ayven
    April 20

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    There is much encouragement to be found in the knowledge that God loves you. He will always take care of us all. God is glorified through everything, always. Even the pain we go through... We just need to remember He is with us and try to learn from it.

    I really liked the these lines:
    "I believe that there is more to this.
    Past the tears and pain, God is glorified."

    Very true. Very powerful.
    Liam, don't give in. Praying for you and your loved ones.

    ~Ayven


  • This Is My Story
    April 20

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    I love this. It really speaks out. Ive had some troubles in the past but since Ive started going to church and having a better relationship with God I have felt so much better as a person. This person, Liam, should most definently listen to you. Very well written!


  • Sortingthroughlife
    April 20

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    Oh wow.
    I know this is for Liam, but you have no idea how encouraged I felt after I read it!

    Wonderful piece, probably my favorite to date.


  • perfectsunset gold member
    April 20
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    you're very welcome

  • perfectsunset gold member
    April 20

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    Aww... this was so beautiful.
    this is full of hope and strength
    from the Lord not to give up, and I'm sure Liam
    will love this.

    Such a wonderful write

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